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		<title>By: Jennifer</title>
		<link>http://romanceuniversity.org/2010/06/18/ask-an-editor-synopsis-vs-outline/comment-page-1/#comment-5911</link>
		<dc:creator>Jennifer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Jun 2010 21:59:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thank you, Teresa!</description>
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		<title>By: Theresa Stevens</title>
		<link>http://romanceuniversity.org/2010/06/18/ask-an-editor-synopsis-vs-outline/comment-page-1/#comment-5910</link>
		<dc:creator>Theresa Stevens</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Jun 2010 19:42:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sorry, everyone, to be so late to reply. Major storms in Chicago Friday, and power was out all over the place.</description>
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		<title>By: Theresa Stevens</title>
		<link>http://romanceuniversity.org/2010/06/18/ask-an-editor-synopsis-vs-outline/comment-page-1/#comment-5909</link>
		<dc:creator>Theresa Stevens</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Jun 2010 19:42:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Leona, I don&#039;t think anyone is ever really comfortable writing a synopsis. You just have to do it anyway. Why not try this -- let one of your characters write the synopsis. That might be a useful exercise in getting you over the voice hurdle.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Leona, I don&#8217;t think anyone is ever really comfortable writing a synopsis. You just have to do it anyway. Why not try this &#8212; let one of your characters write the synopsis. That might be a useful exercise in getting you over the voice hurdle.</p>
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		<title>By: Theresa Stevens</title>
		<link>http://romanceuniversity.org/2010/06/18/ask-an-editor-synopsis-vs-outline/comment-page-1/#comment-5908</link>
		<dc:creator>Theresa Stevens</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Jun 2010 19:39:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Jennifer, I can&#039;t really tell you a rule of thumb other than this: If it helps your synopsis make more sense, then name the secondaries. How will you know if it helps your synopsis make more sense? Well, if the characters are important enough to the plot that they appear repeatedly in the synopsis and you want the reader to remember them by name, then name them. If a placeholder term (&quot;ex-boyfriend&quot; or &quot;boss&quot;) will suffice, that might be easier to track. Otherwise, you risk having the reader go, &quot;Wait, who was Jonas again? The brother? Or the dude with the dynamite?&quot;

About 20 years ago, the rule of thumb for synopses was 1 page for every 10,000 words of text. That ration has changed over the years until now we&#039;re at 1 page for every 25-40,000 words or so. 

But the best rule is to check the guidelines for the house you&#039;re targeting. Always.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Jennifer, I can&#8217;t really tell you a rule of thumb other than this: If it helps your synopsis make more sense, then name the secondaries. How will you know if it helps your synopsis make more sense? Well, if the characters are important enough to the plot that they appear repeatedly in the synopsis and you want the reader to remember them by name, then name them. If a placeholder term (&#8220;ex-boyfriend&#8221; or &#8220;boss&#8221;) will suffice, that might be easier to track. Otherwise, you risk having the reader go, &#8220;Wait, who was Jonas again? The brother? Or the dude with the dynamite?&#8221;</p>
<p>About 20 years ago, the rule of thumb for synopses was 1 page for every 10,000 words of text. That ration has changed over the years until now we&#8217;re at 1 page for every 25-40,000 words or so. </p>
<p>But the best rule is to check the guidelines for the house you&#8217;re targeting. Always.</p>
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		<title>By: Theresa Stevens</title>
		<link>http://romanceuniversity.org/2010/06/18/ask-an-editor-synopsis-vs-outline/comment-page-1/#comment-5907</link>
		<dc:creator>Theresa Stevens</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Jun 2010 19:33:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sarah, a proposal includes a synopsis plus sample chapters. Many places will buy from established authors on a proposals instead of a full manuscript.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sarah, a proposal includes a synopsis plus sample chapters. Many places will buy from established authors on a proposals instead of a full manuscript.</p>
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		<title>By: Sarah M. Anderson</title>
		<link>http://romanceuniversity.org/2010/06/18/ask-an-editor-synopsis-vs-outline/comment-page-1/#comment-5902</link>
		<dc:creator>Sarah M. Anderson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 19 Jun 2010 21:21:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for the posting! I emailed Kelsey with a similar question. My confusion stems from a third term that may or may not be used interchangeably--&quot;proposal&quot;. My agent told me to work up a proposal for a book instead of just writing the darn thing. Personally, writing the darn thing would be easier. So is &quot;proposal&quot; synonymous with &quot;synopsis&quot; or does that have a different meaning? And this is for fiction, by the way.

Thanks so much for your help!
Sarah</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the posting! I emailed Kelsey with a similar question. My confusion stems from a third term that may or may not be used interchangeably&#8211;&#8221;proposal&#8221;. My agent told me to work up a proposal for a book instead of just writing the darn thing. Personally, writing the darn thing would be easier. So is &#8220;proposal&#8221; synonymous with &#8220;synopsis&#8221; or does that have a different meaning? And this is for fiction, by the way.</p>
<p>Thanks so much for your help!<br />
Sarah</p>
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		<title>By: Jennifer</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jennifer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 19 Jun 2010 00:31:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Teresa! 

Aside from the H/H, if a secondary character plays a major part in the plot, should he/she be named? I have more than two secondary characters that are involved in the plot twists and I&#039;ve &quot;read&quot; that as a rule, only one other character (other than the H/H) should be included in a synopsis. 

My other question is how long should a synopsis be for a single title romance that&#039;s around 350-400 pages? I&#039;ve &quot;heard&quot; there should be a paragraph for each chapter. 

I&#039;ve decided to write the synopsis first for my next manuscript. I usually outline the story before hand, though it changes a lot as the story makes it onto the page. I took a synopsis workshop and it really opened my eyes to plot holes...and not in a good way! Filling out the templates in the book &quot;Break Into Fiction&quot; helped me establish the &quot;framework&quot; (for lack of a better phrase!) for writing the synopsis...now whether it&#039;s any good is the big question! 

Thanks! Hope everyone has a great weekend!
Jen</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Teresa! </p>
<p>Aside from the H/H, if a secondary character plays a major part in the plot, should he/she be named? I have more than two secondary characters that are involved in the plot twists and I&#8217;ve &#8220;read&#8221; that as a rule, only one other character (other than the H/H) should be included in a synopsis. </p>
<p>My other question is how long should a synopsis be for a single title romance that&#8217;s around 350-400 pages? I&#8217;ve &#8220;heard&#8221; there should be a paragraph for each chapter. </p>
<p>I&#8217;ve decided to write the synopsis first for my next manuscript. I usually outline the story before hand, though it changes a lot as the story makes it onto the page. I took a synopsis workshop and it really opened my eyes to plot holes&#8230;and not in a good way! Filling out the templates in the book &#8220;Break Into Fiction&#8221; helped me establish the &#8220;framework&#8221; (for lack of a better phrase!) for writing the synopsis&#8230;now whether it&#8217;s any good is the big question! </p>
<p>Thanks! Hope everyone has a great weekend!<br />
Jen</p>
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		<title>By: Leona Bushman</title>
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		<dc:creator>Leona Bushman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 18 Jun 2010 19:39:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I have a question. Do you have any idea how to get us new writers more comfortable with writing the synopsis. I seem to lose the voice of my manuscript when sriting queries or synopsis. Forget the outline. I am not even going there. I did one for myself and killed my story and creativity and am now in process of CPR and defib.

I had a partial request with a synopsis. I am sure the synopsis killed it. (the query was painstakingly edited by someone from a workshop, so I got past step one) 

Actually I will take ideas from anyone who has had to write the synopsis for an agent/editor and had it work... Desperate, want to write, need to write, but HELP :D</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I have a question. Do you have any idea how to get us new writers more comfortable with writing the synopsis. I seem to lose the voice of my manuscript when sriting queries or synopsis. Forget the outline. I am not even going there. I did one for myself and killed my story and creativity and am now in process of CPR and defib.</p>
<p>I had a partial request with a synopsis. I am sure the synopsis killed it. (the query was painstakingly edited by someone from a workshop, so I got past step one) </p>
<p>Actually I will take ideas from anyone who has had to write the synopsis for an agent/editor and had it work&#8230; Desperate, want to write, need to write, but HELP <img src='http://romanceuniversity.org/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif' alt=':D' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Murphy</title>
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		<dc:creator>Murphy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 18 Jun 2010 19:21:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Theresa!

For some unknown reason, the process of writing a synopsis escapes me.  I’ve read - no, devoured, everything on the topic and then when I sit down, totally inspired by great ideas - and I start typing?   Holy flaming pages of crap!  Seriously, I’ve actually sat there after I’ve completed my first run and stared at the computer screen going WTF?  Even I don’t understand what I’m trying to say there.  Or?  Where did that fancy-shmancy word come from?  Queen Elizabeth herself?  I’ve actually made gagging noises so loudly that honey’s come rushing into the room ready to do the heimlich on me.

But after stepping away from it for a time, I’ve boiled a part of the problem down to one thing.  For me, it’s subplots that are tied into the final resolution.  That’s where I go bi-polar and get to the end of the freaking thing and go uh-oh.  I need to mention this or that first - so I go back to the beginning and start plugging in stuff that probably doesn’t matter, but I have this need to try and make it work with the meat of the meal - so to speak.  And even though I know it dilutes the message - AND - messes with my over-all writing tone/style I’m loath to forget about plugging this information in.

So my question would be.  Is including all the ties to the final resolution important? I’m of a mind that this is what makes the story interesting - and it’s the story idea your trying to sell with a synopsis, right?    

Murphy</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Theresa!</p>
<p>For some unknown reason, the process of writing a synopsis escapes me.  I’ve read &#8211; no, devoured, everything on the topic and then when I sit down, totally inspired by great ideas &#8211; and I start typing?   Holy flaming pages of crap!  Seriously, I’ve actually sat there after I’ve completed my first run and stared at the computer screen going WTF?  Even I don’t understand what I’m trying to say there.  Or?  Where did that fancy-shmancy word come from?  Queen Elizabeth herself?  I’ve actually made gagging noises so loudly that honey’s come rushing into the room ready to do the heimlich on me.</p>
<p>But after stepping away from it for a time, I’ve boiled a part of the problem down to one thing.  For me, it’s subplots that are tied into the final resolution.  That’s where I go bi-polar and get to the end of the freaking thing and go uh-oh.  I need to mention this or that first &#8211; so I go back to the beginning and start plugging in stuff that probably doesn’t matter, but I have this need to try and make it work with the meat of the meal &#8211; so to speak.  And even though I know it dilutes the message &#8211; AND &#8211; messes with my over-all writing tone/style I’m loath to forget about plugging this information in.</p>
<p>So my question would be.  Is including all the ties to the final resolution important? I’m of a mind that this is what makes the story interesting &#8211; and it’s the story idea your trying to sell with a synopsis, right?    </p>
<p>Murphy</p>
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		<title>By: Wendy Marcus</title>
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		<dc:creator>Wendy Marcus</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 18 Jun 2010 17:47:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Theresa!

Thanks for the info! I actually don&#039;t mind writing synopses. Whether I do them well is another thing entirely.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Theresa!</p>
<p>Thanks for the info! I actually don&#8217;t mind writing synopses. Whether I do them well is another thing entirely.</p>
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