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Are Your Stakes High Enough? with Janice Hardy

Today, we welcome back author and blogger Janice Hardy [1], who explains why raising the stakes in your story ultimately rewards your reader.

Great to have you with us again, Janice! 

Stakes are a critical part of any novel, because what’s at risk is often equal to how much a reader cares about the plot. Low stakes usually means a bored reader, no matter how much they might care about the characters. There’s nothing to keep them on the edge of their seats.

There are different levels of stakes, however, and what will grab readers and keep them on the edges of their seats isn’t always what we’d expect. The end of the world feels like the highest stake of all, but readers know the world isn’t really going to end, so it’s rarely a credible threat. Death of the protagonist is another seemingly high stake, but again, very few protagonists actually die.

Let’s take a look at the two areas where stakes will come from: Personal stakes and plot stakes.

Personal Stakes

Personal stakes are what the protagonist doesn’t want to have happen because it will hurt her personally. She’ll lose her job, the serial killer will Janice_Hardy [2]murder her child, or the action will go against everything she believes in. They drive the story and make readers care about the outcome as much as the protagonist does. They’re consequences that can (and do) happen to make the protagonist’s life harder or her job tougher, and force her to sacrifice and make some difficult personal choices.

They’re also what keeps the protagonist from running away when it gets tough, and stops her from saying, “Yes, I don’t really want the evil sorcerer to take over and enslave the city, but if I take off right now, I can be far away when it happens and I won’t have to die or deal with this mess.” It’s better if she can’t run because a loved one is being held captive by that evil sorcerer and if she runs, that person dies.

Personal stakes are also things that can and likely will happen. Readers know the protagonist is most likely going to stop the serial killer in the end, though that killer might kill the protagonist’s wife or child before he’s caught. Victory will come at a price, and they’ll read on to see what that price might be.

Plot Stakes

Plot stakes are the consequences that matter to the world at large. The bigger, plot-driving consequences that will happen if the protagonist fails to do whatever the core conflict requires her to do. If the princess doesn’t stop the evil wizard, the land will be enslaved. Plot stakes are typically the bigger, more horrible outcomes, and while they’re something the protagonist is trying to stop, odds are it won’t actually come true.

Plot stakes are useful because they provide a larger scope in which to develop a novel. They can give those smaller, personal stakes greater meaning by showing how a protagonist’s sacrifice might benefit others. It allows characters to be noble (or selfish), rise above their personal struggles (or collapse under the weight), and become a force for good (or evil) in their society. Plot stakes often resonate with readers on multiple levels because they work with the big picture.

Making Stakes Work For Your Novel

If the stakes only work from a cold, flat, plot perspective, and even the writer doesn’t care if the problem is solved or not beyond an “ooooh that’s cool” interest, odds are the personal stakes are still missing. Without those, we risk ending up with a novel that’s all mechanics and no soul (and if you have a completed manuscript and readers just aren’t connecting to it, this could be why).

Don’t look at just the plot side of things when creating stakes. Think about how those stakes affect the protagonist personally. Do you care about this character and what happens to her, or are you just running her through a gauntlet of problems to illustrate a plot idea? If it doesn’t affect you to put her in danger and cause her trouble (either hurt you or make you giggle in glee), then why should readers feel any more emotion?

If the protagonist has nothing personal at risk, and can stop at any time with no personal repercussions, there’s a good chance the stakes are low, even if they’re high from a plot standpoint (such as high plot stakes but low personal stakes). “They could die” feels high, but if she walks away she’ll live. Problem solved. Sure, others might die, but do readers really care about a faceless mass of unnamed people? Nah.

Here are some questions you can ask to test your own stakes:

1. If the protagonist walked away, what would change?

2. If you put the second-most important character in the protagonist’s slot, what would change?

3. What does the protagonist lose if she walks away from this problem?

4. What sacrifice does the protagonist have to make for everything to turn out the way she wants?

If we feel it, then the characters will feel it. If the characters feel it, the readers will feel it. Once they care, they’ll read on, which is exactly what we want for our novels.

How high are the stakes in your novel? Do you have both personal and plot stakes?

Join us on Wednesday, April 16th, when Rie Warren presents: Burning up the Pages…and the Sheets 


Looking for more on planning or revising your novel? Check out my newest book Planning Your Novel: Ideas and Structure [3], a series of self-guided workshops that help you turn your idea into a novel.

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Bio: Janice Hardy is the author of the teen fantasy trilogy The Healing Wars, where she tapped into her own dark side to create a world where healing was dangerous, and those with the best intentions often made the worst choices. Her novels include The Shifter [5], Blue Fire [6], and Darkfall [7] from Balzer+Bray/Harper Collins. The first book in her Foundations of Fiction series, Planning Your Novel: Ideas and Structure [3] is out now. She lives in Georgia with her husband, one yard zombie, three cats, and a very nervous freshwater eel. Find out more about writing at her site, Fiction University [8], or find her on Twitter @Janice_Hardy.

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15 Comments To "Are Your Stakes High Enough? with Janice Hardy"

#1 Comment By Carol Baldwin On April 15, 2014 @ 7:34 am

As always, Janice shares incredible writerly wisdom. Thanks for running this post!

#2 Comment By Janice Hardy On April 15, 2014 @ 2:29 pm

Thanks Carol!

#3 Comment By Carrie Spencer On April 15, 2014 @ 9:05 am

Morning Janice!

Great post! I always wonder if I’ve got the stakes high enough, now your list will help me decide. Most of the time my protagonist could walk away, so I know I have to “up” the stakes!

Great post again Janice!


#4 Comment By Janice Hardy On April 15, 2014 @ 2:31 pm

Glad it was helpful. The walk away tip has always been a favorite of mine. So easy to ask and so clear when it’s “yes.”

#5 Comment By Becke Martin Davis On April 15, 2014 @ 10:05 am

I just ordered PLANNING YOUR NOVEL even though I’m an avowed pantser. I’ve got a stack of how-to books – I hope I can use them to polish all the stories waiting for revision.

Thanks for a great post!

#6 Comment By Janice Hardy On April 15, 2014 @ 2:32 pm

Aw, thanks so much! Three of my four beta readers for the book actually got unstuck on their novels after reading it, so I think it’ll be just as useful for revisions as planning. Hope it serves you well!

#7 Comment By Linda Andersen On April 15, 2014 @ 2:28 pm

Thank you Janice! That is the clearest and most concise explanation of Personal vs. Plot stakes I have EVER come across. I’m definitely going to buy your book!

#8 Comment By Janice Hardy On April 15, 2014 @ 2:33 pm

Thank you! That makes me feel good. I love it when something I say clicks for a fellow writer.

#9 Comment By Jennifer Tanner On April 15, 2014 @ 4:16 pm

Hi Janice,

When I’m formulating a story in my head, outlining it, writing or revising, I’m always asking myself if the stakes are high enough (and credible enough) to sustain the momentum. I write ST contemp, so my H/H are usually fighting their internal demons, which stand in the way of their goals, like scraping out a living or saving their business. Since their external goal isn’t on the scale of catching a serial killer or saving the world from nuclear meltdown, I’m left wondering if the stakes are high enough.

Thanks for another clear, concise and enlightening post!

#10 Comment By Janice Hardy On April 16, 2014 @ 5:41 am

Jennifer, you just gave me an idea for another article, so thanks!

I think quieter stakes are both harder and easier. Harder because they often feel “low” because they’re not end of the world, but easier because they’re usually personal and thus grab a reader faster.

For those types, it can help to think about how the protagonist’s life will change if they lose. It might not be the end of THE world, but it would probably be the end of THEIR world, and that’s high stakes.

#11 Comment By jackielayton On April 15, 2014 @ 6:23 pm

Thanks so much. You’ve convinced me my stakes are not strong enough.

#12 Comment By Janice Hardy On April 16, 2014 @ 5:41 am

I hope it also sparked some ideas of how to raise them 🙂

#13 Comment By jackielayton On April 16, 2014 @ 6:09 am

Yes! I’m playing with ways to increase the stakes. Everything from being scared of a dog to a threatening lawsuit.

#14 Comment By Janice Hardy On April 16, 2014 @ 7:40 am

Oh good! Best on luck on your revisions.

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