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Out, Out, Damned Writer By Joanna Campbell Slan

Unlike groceries, that nearly always have sell-by dates, books have long shelf-lives. Authors, on the other hand, may occasionally feel themselves and their writing go a little stale. Today author Joanna Campbell Slan shares some tips on keeping your writing fresh. Scroll to the bottom of the post for details on Joanna’s digital giveaway!


Like a lot of my author friends, I am an introvert. As the years roll by, I have become increasingly happy in the company of me, myself, and the characters I create. But to keep my work fresh, I realize that I need exposure to new situations. Recycling is great, but without an intervention, the people on my pages will start to resemble each other too much—and that’s a sure path to boring my audience.
Once in a while we all need to hit the refresh key. With that in mind, I decided to make a signing at a dollhouse festival do double-duty by people-watching during the event. With pen in hand, I paid special attention to mannerisms, both large and small, of the folks who passed by my table. Here’s a portion of my list:

• Twirling eyeglasses by the stem.
• Licking her bottom lip.
• Squinting and leaning closer to see.
• Walking with her weight on the balls of her feet, causing her to lurch forward.
• Flipping her head to swing her dangling earrings around.
• Wearing glasses on the tip of her nose and pushing them up frequently.
• Plucking at his chest with one hand.
• Rocking from one foot to the other, left to right, repeatedly.

I liked this exercise so well that I wanted more. More new stuff. More encounters with people outside my usual sphere of influence. That’s when the idea hit me: I’d make a late night run to the local Walmart. There I spotted three characters who are destined to appear in my next book:

• An anorexic-looking young woman was shopping with her mother. At first I thought the girl was wearing a gray-colored mask because her eyebrow pencil was badly smeared. On her feet were a pair of sky-high wedges, but they didn’t fit properly, and her toes hung over the front edge. Florida is ultra-casual, but she was dressed like a contestant on The Bachelor. She wore a pair of cream-colored, pencil-thin slacks, and a tightly laced corset.

• An older man rolled up behind me in a motorized cart. “Beep, beep,” he shouted gleefully, as he clipped my heels. When I jumped to one side, he grinned at me. His faded blue eyes twinkled as he adjusted his black baseball cap with an embroidered emblem that suggested he was a veteran. After the clerk filled his basket with a couple of plastic bags, his eyes slid left and right furtively. While I watched, he revved his motor and nearly bumped into another female customer.

• A gorgeous African-American man, who looked to be in his twenties, strode past me as I pushed my shopping cart toward my car. When he glanced up from his texting, he gave me a nod of greeting and a brilliant white smile. I caught a whiff of an expensive designer cologne. He wore fitted jeans, suede Hush Puppy-type shoes, and a black tee-shirt that hugged him like a second skin. In one hand he carried an iPhone and in the other a bag from an auto parts store.


Encouraged by all this new material, I decided that total immersion was in order. I accepted an invitation from my friend Carol to be a guest in her home outside of Providence, Rhode Island. On the plane ride here, I made the decision to give myself over to new experiences. The first night of my visit, I let her husband choose a dish for me from a local restaurant. He ordered calamari. I’d had octopus one other time. I didn’t like it then, but what the heck? I swallowed my objection and waited for my meal.

When it came, I tasted it cautiously, only to discover that I loved it. As I put my folded napkin next to my empty plate, I also patted myself on the back. I had transitioned from being an observer to being a participant in a new environment.

I decided to write this blog post, as a way of reminding myself how grand it can be to step outside of my routine. I’ll never be a social butterfly. I enjoy my solitude too much. But it’s clear that being jostled out of my comfort zone will be good for me and my writing.


What have you done lately to shake up your work? To get out of your writing rut? To change up your characters? Have my experiences given you any new ideas?

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Joanna Campbell Slan is the nationally bestselling and award-winning author of 30 books. Her most recent titles are All Washed Up (Cara Mia Delgatto Mystery Series #3); Glue, Baby, Gone (Kiki Lowenstein Mystery Series #12); and Happy Homicides 3: Summertime Crime (an anthology of cozy mysteries by a dozen authors). See all her work at or contact her at

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22 Responses to “Out, Out, Damned Writer By Joanna Campbell Slan”

  1. I’m introverted too – something my extremely extroverted spouse just doesn’t get. In my day job though, I’m customer facing and I come into contact with all sorts of people; some I know and some I don’t. I’ve been doing a lot of watching and listening lately. It’s been interesting to hear the stories people tell, to watch their mannerisms and to pick up on things like turn of phrase, local color and slang and such. I make mental notes (because it would be rude to stand there and make actual notes) and then scribble down things that I remember later that might be useful.

    I’ve started to use writers eyes everywhere. Everything is fodder for a story now that I’m working on book #10. It wasn’t that way with book #1.

    Posted by Anne Hagan | June 6, 2016, 7:18 am
  2. Great reminder – because characters are all around us! To refresh me and get ideas for my hot cops (and characters in general) – I go to a fundraiser hosted by cops (Tip-a-Cop – been to several). I attended a 12-week Citizen’s Academy in one city when I lived there. I attended a really reduced event in a second city. I need to get out on another ride-along. I got a personal show of the new SUVs. I’ve ridden in a $400,000 version of an anti-terrorism SWAT truck (A Bearcat) I am dying to get inside a Mobile Command center. (OK – my other life – I was an engineer. I love all that control stuff.) I tried walking around lake MiraMar with cops — after an 18 year hiatus (living somewhere else) – and —yep— had to be rescued by a cop! I reported a possible kidnapping and watched the deployment. The next door neighbor in another city was CSI’d by the FBI – I watched in fascination. (Missing Felon) It’s all good.

    Posted by Donnamaie White | June 6, 2016, 9:21 am
  3. Thanks so much for this fabulous post, Joanna! I’m going to borrow some of your ideas. I’m not an introvert, but I could really use a “refresh” button!

    BTW, the details of Joanna’s giveaway are linked to her Facebook page. I copied the details and didn’t realize I’d brought all the Facebook details along with the information. There’s no need to log in to the Facebook page for THIS giveaway – just post a comment here and your name will be in the drawing!

    Posted by Becke Martin Davis | June 6, 2016, 10:21 am
  4. That’s TOLD you. Sigh.

    Posted by Joanna Campbell Slan | June 6, 2016, 10:51 am
  5. I love your idea for a late-night Walmart run! You’ll certainly see the oddballs. I always meet interesting people during 6-AM grocery runs. Last time I talked to Voldemort about the peaches. He was very pleasant. Another time the produce guys were stocking apricots, and exclaiming to each other in hushed voices about how sometimes the produce that comes in is just garbage. All being filed away for writing fodder. 🙂

    Posted by Kessie | June 6, 2016, 4:31 pm
  6. I love to people watch! One of my favorite things is to watch families in public settings, a restaurant, park, church, airport. Their interaction is so telling. Most of the time I see very good parenting. A few times I feel so bad for the kids or wife, etc. I can remember those who I so strongly suspect are being abused in private. The friend from church who I ran into at a store, was smiling and chatting with her kids — until her husband came into the store and she went white, turned and left me. It was years ago. I shudder at the memory.

    Posted by Sherry Weddle | June 6, 2016, 8:43 pm
  7. I love to people watch and often jot down bits of overheard conversations. Restaurants are really good for listening to other people’s conversations. I also people watch and listen while waiting in the long lines whenever we go to Walt Disney World.

    Posted by Carrie Nichols | June 7, 2016, 8:56 am

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